2020年06月08日 06/06/2020 GCSE
Writing frame: P(point)
E(evidence)
A(analyst)
R (refer back/conclusion)
1）字数不要超太多。
2）读题要认真，重点一定要写到。
3）3个时态一定都要有。
4）语言用词多样化。
5）用连词，写长句。
6）如何表达观点：我认为，我觉得，
7）结尾：由此可见，总而言之，最后
AQA和Edexcel 写作评分标准
AQA
W1，2选1，75个字，4个bulletpoints,
16分: content 10分，quality of language 6分
W2，2选1，125个字，2个bulletpoints,
32分：content 15分，range of language 12分，accuracy 5分
翻译，12分：conveying key messages 6分，
Application of grammatical knowledge of language and structures6分
Edexcel
W1，2选1，80-110字，4个bulletpoints,
20分：content 12分，linguistic knowledge and accuracy 8分
W2，2选1，130-180字，4个bulletpoints,
28分：content 16分，linguistic knowledge and accuracy 12分
翻译，12分
注意事项
1）内容准确（包括全部要点，论述清楚，格式正确formal/informal…）
2）3种动词时态写作！！！
3）写长句用连接词！！！
4）用词准确,cant effect the reader’s understanding.(同音近音字，比划偏旁…)
Edexcel 作文
作文1，20分
Mingming, your Chinese friend, has sent you an email about what he did last summer.
Write a reply to Mingming. You must refer to the following points:
• how you spent your best-ever holiday
• how you usually spend your free time
• why schools should or should not have long holidays
• your plans for this summer.
Write approximately 80–110 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for an informal email.
要点：
1）“最好的！”用adj的superlative来描述。过去时态。
2）“一般”
3）你的观点是什么？ ”should “or” should not”? 选一个，并说明原因。我觉得/我认为…
4）将来时态。 “this summer”
作文2，28分
A Chinese website is looking for articles about sport. Write an article to interest readers. You must refer to the following points:
• details of a sports event you experienced recently
• a popular sport in your country
• whether sport is an important part of young people’s life
• a sport activity in the future you want to take part in.
Justify your ideas and your opinions. Write approximately 130–180 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for a formal article.
要点：
1）“最近的“”你体验的“”一个“体育活动。过去时态。Details. 不要只一句话。
2）”你国家流行的“ “一个” “体育项目”。
3）你的回答can be Yes, can be No, can be half/half. 请给相关的details，“比如说：“
4）将来时态，一个体育活动。请说明原因。
Homework：
Your school magazine seeks your opinions on your plans for the future.
Write an article for the school magazine. You must refer to the following points:
• your main interest
• which subject you enjoyed the most
• why young people should or should not go to university
• your ideal job in the future.
Write approximately 80–110 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for an informal article.