2020年06月08日 06/06/2020 GCSE
Writing frame: P(point)
E(evidence)
A(analyst)
R (refer back/conclusion)
1)字数不要超太多。
2)读题要认真,重点一定要写到。
3)3个时态一定都要有。
4)语言用词多样化。
5)用连词,写长句。
6)如何表达观点:我认为,我觉得,
7)结尾:由此可见,总而言之,最后
AQA和Edexcel 写作评分标准
AQA
W1,2选1,75个字,4个bulletpoints,
16分: content 10分,quality of language 6分
W2,2选1,125个字,2个bulletpoints,
32分:content 15分,range of language 12分,accuracy 5分
翻译,12分:conveying key messages 6分,
Application of grammatical knowledge of language and structures6分
Edexcel
W1,2选1,80-110字,4个bulletpoints,
20分:content 12分,linguistic knowledge and accuracy 8分
W2,2选1,130-180字,4个bulletpoints,
28分:content 16分,linguistic knowledge and accuracy 12分
翻译,12分
注意事项
1)内容准确(包括全部要点,论述清楚,格式正确formal/informal…)
2)3种动词时态写作!!!
3)写长句用连接词!!!
4)用词准确,cant effect the reader’s understanding.(同音近音字,比划偏旁…)
Edexcel 作文
作文1,20分
Mingming, your Chinese friend, has sent you an email about what he did last summer.
Write a reply to Mingming. You must refer to the following points:
• how you spent your best-ever holiday
• how you usually spend your free time
• why schools should or should not have long holidays
• your plans for this summer.
Write approximately 80–110 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for an informal email.
要点:
1)“最好的!”用adj的superlative来描述。过去时态。
2)“一般”
3)你的观点是什么? ”should “or” should not”? 选一个,并说明原因。我觉得/我认为…
4)将来时态。 “this summer”
作文2,28分
A Chinese website is looking for articles about sport. Write an article to interest readers. You must refer to the following points:
• details of a sports event you experienced recently
• a popular sport in your country
• whether sport is an important part of young people’s life
• a sport activity in the future you want to take part in.
Justify your ideas and your opinions. Write approximately 130–180 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for a formal article.
要点:
1)“最近的“”你体验的“”一个“体育活动。过去时态。Details. 不要只一句话。
2)”你国家流行的“ “一个” “体育项目”。
3)你的回答can be Yes, can be No, can be half/half. 请给相关的details,“比如说:“
4)将来时态,一个体育活动。请说明原因。
Homework:
Your school magazine seeks your opinions on your plans for the future.
Write an article for the school magazine. You must refer to the following points:
• your main interest
• which subject you enjoyed the most
• why young people should or should not go to university
• your ideal job in the future.
Write approximately 80–110 characters in Chinese. Use appropriate language for an informal article.